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Submitted: May 18
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I'll put the second one up in a few hours.

Pencil version: [link]
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~DeinReichKommtNicht:iconDeinReichKommtNicht: May 18, 2008, 6:34:40 PM
Nice angles. I actually like the sketchy look to it, adds to the mood.

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~poproxx101:iconpoproxx101: May 18, 2008, 6:49:39 PM
nice angles.

lol
i laughed.

XD

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~smilefortyeight:iconsmilefortyeight: May 18, 2008, 8:41:47 PM
*finally appreciates the perspective in that last panel* Noticeable improvement over the pencil--I'd like to have seen more of that stark, all-black shading, though.

I have a question. It doesn't look like Eddie has any paintings hung in this room, like Nny did. If he isn't an artist (a slight leap, but whatever), then do you think he had a comparable career/pastime/obsession to Johnny's pre-insanity painting?

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~Rainbow-man:iconRainbow-man: May 18, 2008, 9:50:19 PM
Did you read the other meassage that i left on the last page of the scetchythings? because if you didn't go do that. I Love the way you draw so much, i could bleed.

more then i always do.

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~anthrop:iconanthrop: May 18, 2008, 11:30:49 PM
Whoa, you're doing an Eddie comic? I'm so happy. It looks great so far. I love the sketchiness and the angles and pretty much what everybody else has said, ha.

Mind if I critique a bit? In panel one Nny's legs look exceptionally disproportionate, even for your style which seems to hail towards long limbs. That's all I got.

Oh, except I love your death machine. It's easy to figure out how one dies in it, unlike the one Edgar died in. Ugh, that thing was a monster in it's own right.

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~socio-nycto:iconsocio-nycto: May 19, 2008, 6:18:37 AM
I already did it , actually, right now I'm just inking it and making it look pretty. If you want to see the pencil version, it's here: [link]

Thanks for the critique, by the way. It's always good to know what I'm doing wrong, that means I can do it better.

XD I don't think the spike things are actually sharp, thy just aid in crushing th poor guy to death.

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~BitterApples:iconBitterApples: May 19, 2008, 11:46:45 AM
Nice inks~ :heart: It really improves upon the pencilled version a lot, I think.

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~xamagumox:iconxamagumox: May 19, 2008, 12:09:29 PM
F is for fire... burns down the whole town. U is for uranium... BOMB! N is for no survivoooors~! S'all I could think of upon the last panel.

Yep. I like this and stuff. :+fav:


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~socio-nycto:iconsocio-nycto: May 19, 2008, 12:45:56 PM
No. *runs off to find it*


Don't bleed on my sketchbooks don't bleed on my sketchbooks!!

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